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Battery City

A new begining

detonator revolver pov

DAY 1:


I had finally made out of the city when i slipped and hit my head on a rock.

All i remeber was seeing the guys fighting the Dracs......then i knocked out...

When i woke i was all alone. there was no sign of Party Poison, Kobra KId, Fun Ghoul, or my brother, Jet Star.
i got up shook the dirt off my bright red jeans (which were dirty anyway) and looked around...i was alone in the desert..

oh come on....out of the places why the desert. i thought to myself. then i wondered why did the guys just leave me hear. and what happened. i checked my forehead to see if i was bleeding.
all that was there was a cut and dried blood. it left a crimson stain on my forehead all i cared about was finding the boys and finding.....him...

i only found out 3 weeks ago that Ray, Jet Star, was my long lost brother. and now i lost him.

"i dont intend to loose him again" i mumbled "well once i found him"

by the way the sun was i could determine it was 6:00p.m and it was going to get dark soon.

i need to find shelter.....and fast.
i started to walk but my leg hurt....was it possible that i broke my leg...or got shot in my leg
i just tossed that thought a side and worried about finding shelter or stuff to make a shelter.

i limped about for probably 2 hours...it was dark and cold

i finally found an abonned shack..... yes somewhere i can b safe from those Dracs..

i didnt have my black and white ray gun with me....i assumed i lost it when i fell...

i quickly got into the shelter and rested my eyes....i will search some more in the morning i thought to myself as i drifted off to sleep


DAY 2
ray, jet star, pov

"Come on Gee we have to go back for her!" all i wanted was to find my 17 year old sister i didn't even know i had until 3 weeks ago.

"NO! she probably got captured and is under interrigation by Korse" gerard snarled. he has been in a really bad mood lately.....since he almost lost frank and his younger brother to those Dracs.

*sigh* "your probably right" i said looking at my hand that helf my sister's ray gun she threw at me that day.
"thank you, now can we get back to what we were doing" he snapped at me.
i then thought: she culd have woken up and found herself alone and she culd be dead right now....

i couldnt help but think she was out there somewhere looking for me..

"GEE, WE HAVE TO GO BACK AND LOOK FOR HER!!!" i yelled "What if the Dracs thought she was dead and left her be and she culd be in danger...or dead"

"FINE!" gerard said "We will go and look for her....but if we dont find her then she was captured and brainwashed"
"ok....i have a feeling that she is still alive and got away from the Dracs." i dont what i was...i just had this weird feeling that we wuld find her and she was looking for us....

Notes

so how was my first chapter?? this is my first time doing this...i hope it was ok..or good...i dont know.. but leave any suggestions or thoughts u have about the story so far. i dont know how long i will make this story... 10 chapters mayb...idk...i guess we will find out now wont we

Comments

I love this story!!!! Can't wait for more!
-Cellophane Exploder
Cry For Me Cry For Me
5/5/13
I like it :D I can't wait for the next chapter!!!! XD
Lucyriverstone Lucyriverstone
4/15/13