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Early Sunsets Over Monroeville

Early Sunsets Over Monroeville

I’ve got to say Monroeville had the most beautiful sunsets. The mountains that surrounded the town made them look even more stunning. It was the perfect scene. The pinky orange colours that filled the sky made me think can my life get any more perfect?
I had the most beautiful wife and we lived in such a beautiful area. It was just like a movie, the geeky guy who gets the beauty. I loved it. I loved her even more. Her dark curls hanged back on her head. Her high cheekbones that held her luscious rouged red lips which hid her golden smile. Her deep chocolate eyes. The eyes that stared into mine. The eyes that made me love her more and more.
This woman done a lot for everyone including me. She deserved the world. But even though Monroeville was a beautiful place it was dangerous. It was unsafe to keep her here.
We wondered through the mall. Half price sales all up on the windows. Strangely the mall was empty. Most people would think a mall would be packed if there were sales on. Not in Monroeville. Everyone wanted to leave. They put sales up so shop owners could make enough money to leave.
I walked past a fountain with my girl in my arms. I checked to see if I had any spare change. two dimes. Perfect. I handed her one and told her to make a wish. I used the other coin for my own wish:
“I wish to get through this hell of a town with my beautiful bride”
We wondered for about 10 more minutes looking for a perfect hiding spot.
I saw one. One of them. A Zombie.
I and my girl ran up and down escalators trying to escape. She fell behind me. I ran to grab her.
She gave out a big scream but managing to catch my eyes as she whispered in pain “I- I love you”
I… I was too late…
She started to change… she began to lose her beauty… she was becoming one of them.
Just because of this one bite…

I didn’t know what to do. I grabbed her body and ran. She was out cold for now but that would change but dawn tomorrow.
I took her to the spot I first met her. It was on the outskirts of town, near one of the mountains. I built a house there for us to live in once the zombie apocalypse was gone. I wanted to start a family with her. She had her whole life a head. And there she is sat. dead.
I laid her across our bed.
I had to get her out of this pain.
I had to kill her.
I really didn’t want to. Imagine having to kill the one you loved. The only one you had left. Every piece of happiness was gone out of me. What have I done to her? I was the one to take her to the mall. I was the one to ruin her. She wasn’t this beautiful woman anymore, she… she was a monster. I made her a monster. She changed just because a zombie bit her.
But does anyone notice?
But does anyone care?
Who am I kidding? I care about her… I love her with every inch inside of me… she was my wife, my queen, my everything. And I had to throw her away. She wasn’t the woman I knew so would it matter is she was dead?
I pulled out my gun. The weapon I used to keep the Zombies away. She was a zombie so would anything matter if she’s already dead.
I pulled the gun up to her head. Her eye vacant and stained. Before I pull this trigger…
I need to tell you how much I love you…
“I love you with everything I have and it kills me to have to do this to you. I want you out of this pain. I want you to know I would do anything to have you back. You are my sally to my jack. I had no one and didn’t want to live. You came into my life and turned it upside down. It kills me to see you go. I guess that you are gone; I am dead as well as you were the only thing that made me want to live. And without you should I even bother breathing. I love you beautiful with all my heart. Sweet dreams”
I gave her a kiss on the forehead. Her eyes opened and they looked like she wanted to say “I love you” back.
Should I be shocked with the last thing she said?
I mean I went through that emotional message and all that could come out her mouth was “brains”. These words changed nothing. I guess the woman I love is gone.
But does anyone notice?
But does anyone care?
And in saying you loved me, made things harder at best… I replayed that moment through my head. Constantly “I love you” the pain and fear in her eyes. I just wanted… I needed her back…
These words change nothing as your body remains. Cold, bloodless and paled skin. Dead.
There’s no room in this hell. There’s no room in the next.
Hell. That’s what Monroeville was. I would do anything to put my angel into heaven. That’s where she is. The next hell couldn’t accept her; she was too innocent. Too beautiful.
Memories. They filled my mind. From the moment we met to the arguments. From marriage to death.
The memories defeat us.
I’ll end this direst.
But does anyone notice?
But does anyone care?
If I had the guts to pull this to your head… but does anything matter if your already dead.
The hardest thing for me is to end this, but I know you need me to do this for you. Promise me youll leave this hell for heaven. There is no room in the next hell; only room for me.
I stared down at her heartless body… beauty crawling away every second… her lips opened slightly and she muttered “I love you”
That was all I needed… she still loved me… But I knew that wouldn’t last long as her skin grew more purple and blue… I needed to kill her before she got worst. I needed to die with her... but should I?
But does anyone notice?
But does anyone care?
I put the trigger to her head. And said my last words to her “I love you”
But does anyone notice there’s a corpse in this bed?

Notes

FINISHED.... you can decided whether he kills himself or not because i didn't know what to do and i wanted it to end just like the song. sorry if this went on a bit as well but the second part to the song goes on for a bit and is very repetitive.


~Much Love~

Comments

@JustaSadNobody
i know it is but thank you:) i kinda just got bored and changed it into my own way, i think of the song in a completely different way to how its presented so i mixed the ideas together:) but thank you so much for saying this :)

Just a point of advice and my sense of knowledge. I read that the song was/is originally based on the old Dawn of the Dead movies. So on my view point they are fighting zombies... "Not knowing you changed from just one bite" is describing how he is losing her to the infection. Also, "and if I had the guts to put this through your head." is saying how he can't kill her because he loves her too much... Well that's just my opinion but besides that this story is pretty good :)

JustaSadNobody JustaSadNobody
5/12/14