I don't feel like I'm strong enough

Okay, So I'm not really liking how the story is right now, so i will be going back and redoing the chapters. Please read them, because it changes the plot line a little bit. It will give me more access to do more chapters, and make them longer. I will put up the edited version of chapter one tomorrow. Under the chapter i will say -edited so you know it's been changed.
Thank you all!

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