Get Ready To Destroya

PartyPoisons P.O.V
I woke up that next morning unbelievably uncomfortable and squished in are car.. It took me a few moments to realize what happened. Me and Frankie were in here last night..
I looked at him and watched him sleep, he looked like and angel, his beautiful black hair falling around his face. I was lost in Frankie's perfection for who-knows-how-long before I got up and decided to wake up the others. We had to keep moving. I got out of the car, slightly sore from sleeping in and uncomfortable position all night, trying not to wake up the angel laying in the back seat. "Mikey, mikey wake up.." I whisper-yelled.
"wh-what?" He sounded half dead and his hair was a mess.
"Help me wake up the others, we are leaving soon."
"Fuck, why? I'm still tired.."
"That sucks, we need to go before the Dracs find us"
"Fiiiiine" Mikey got up and rolled ray over his foot and practically yelled at him to get up. Let's just say Mikey isn't a morning person.. I walked over to Cherri and picked her up I wasn't even going to try to wake the poor kid up, she needed some good sleep. I walked over the the car and looked at frank. "Frankie, baby, you have to wake up.." I watched him rub his eyes and wake up, how is he so beautiful?
"Can I sit in the front today?" He still sounded sleepy, and god it was sexy.
"Yes sweetie, you go sleep up front and I will take care of everything, okay?"
"Are you sure gee?" He looked so innocent and small, the way his words spilled from his mouth made me melt. I needed Frank, I love Frank.
"yeah Hun, you just rest" and with that he closed his eyes and fell back asleep. I put Cherri in the middle-back seat. This kid was a very heavy sleeper, I tried being gentle but it was hard to get her to stay in one spot. I picked up the rest of are bedding and food! we couldn't afford to leave behind anything. Firstly, because we didn't have a whole lot right now. And second, because if the Dracs come by here and see anything we left behind they will know we were there.
After we all were ready to go we drove for a long time. It seemed like forever and everyone but me had fallen back to sleep. After driving pretty much all day in silence, apart from Rays god-awful snoring, I finally saw it. The place that held the man we were looking for, Dr. Death-Defying.

Notes

Okay, I'm thinking of abandoning this story. It seems like no one is liking it and it is really boring.
tell me what you think
xoxoAR