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Desolation Row

Prison

Patrick’s eyes fluttered open, a dull pain throbbing on the side of his head. He touched his head gingerly, feeling a warm, wet substance cover his fingers as he winced at the pain. He looked around; the room was dark except for a single, dimming light bulb that hung from the middle ceiling. “Hello?” He called out, his voice echoing around the room as he tried to stand only to find a chain clamped tightly around his ankle.

The door to the cell suddenly opened and a bright light flooded the room. Patrick shielded his eyes as he saw a figure walk into the room, closing the door behind them. “Who’s there?” Patrick cried, his eyes fixed on the wall where the door was. Footsteps echoed around the room as they walked into the light. “Hello Patrick” Jane said, smiling as she stood before him. Patrick face twisted into a look of hate, his hands curling into fists as he lunged at her. The chain around his ankle pulled him back, making him fall back down to the floor. He listened to her giggle as sat a foot away from his head. “Why are you doing this” He whimpered, pushing himself up from the floor; blood trickling from a fresh cut on his lip as he locked eyes with her. She cocked her head to the side, pushing her blonde fringe out of her eyes as she flashed a wicked smile at him. “Revenge” She replied coldly, her smile fading.

Patrick sat back against the wall, not taking his eyes off her as he scrambled his brain for something, anything that he or his friends could have done to her. He had always been a friend to her. He would never do anything to hurt her or anyone for that matter. “Jane...you need help, I... we, we never did anything to you. Please, just let us go and I promise....” he was quickly cut off by a sharp pain erupting in his shin as Jane kicked out at him, quickly rising to her feet as Patrick cried out. “Don’t you dare turn this back on me! This is your fault! If you hadn’t of left me that night I...” She burst into tears, covering her face with her hands as she sobbed. Patrick stared at her, unsure of what to think. Normally, the horror movie serial killer doesn’t burst into tears when they taunt their victims. “What are you on about?” He asked, completely emotionless.

Jane wiped her eyes, taking a deep breath. “It started on the night you left me alone by the park....

Notes

DOUBLE UPDATE TODAY!
Just a filler chapter before I finally reveal why Jane is doing this to them...

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Comments

@mindchemicals
Don't get too sad- I'm planning to write an alternate ending to this story, it's a shocker x

ThatGeekJess ThatGeekJess
4/17/14

whyyyyy nooo, no one can die, well jane sure as hell can, but not one of the guys! why would you do that to our poor little hearts!??

mindchemicals mindchemicals
4/17/14

@mindchemicals
Thanks :) x I'm glad your enjoying it x

ThatGeekJess ThatGeekJess
4/15/14

Damn that was so worth the wait!! :)

mindchemicals mindchemicals
4/15/14

@frommars
Thank you so much! :) xxx

ThatGeekJess ThatGeekJess
4/15/14