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What If They Find Out

Please Come Back

My Frankie was in a coma.

Oh god, I couldn't handle this. He did not deserve this. Any of this. I walked into the room to see him laying lifeless on the bed. There were wires and tubes coming out of him which looked miserable. Every inch of his skin was bruised and underneath that, he was extremely pale. His nose, ribs, and wrists were bandaged.

I grabbed his hand, "Hey Frankie," I whispered. I rested my head on his chest and cried. "I miss you so much Frank." I stayed there with him for an hour before I spoke again. "Please come back."

Right when I said that, he grunted. Oh my god. "Nurse!" I called. She ran into the room, "What is it?" "He grunted," I told her quickly. She walked around him and preformed a few tests. "I'm sorry sir. It was just a false alarm. These things happen all the time. All of the oxygen rushed out of my lungs.

He wasn't coming back.

Notes

Okay. I had to rewrite this twice. It crashed twice. And each time it only got worse. Sorry. But guess what?! We are NUMBER ONE MOST POPULAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YES!!!!!!! Thanks guys! :)

Comments

@Killjoyforlife
of course :)

AwSugar AwSugar
3/5/15

@Killjoyforlife
I think it's pretty great. We always think it could be better. Nothing wrong w revising. Can't wait for the sequel. After Frank's grad sounds great. We all know what Gee can finally do to Frankie after graduation. ;)

@Hail of Bullets
Thanks for your opinion. And also, thank you for thinking about me too. It's always nice to see that someone cares about my thoughts. :)

@Sharpest_Life_B
Thank you for sharing that. I was thinking a lot of the same things when I wrote that about Bob. It's great to know that people are really getting something out of my story. And I know that it was pretty rushed. I am kind of disappointed with the story. But I would like to do better during the sequel. Which I was planning for after Frank graduates. :)

I'd like a sequel to this. I think this one may have ended just a bit ubruptly but I see how it's an end. I would like to see how they fair in the future. maybe after Frank is 18?