Okay, so the original draft of this story was ridiculously long, so I cut a lot out. Then on my last edit, I took out several more scenes that I felt made the story too long and that didn't really have anything significant for plot development or for character development. However, now that I'm done and currently uninspired for a new story, I'm contemplating posting some of the deleted chapters. Does anyone want to see any of them? They are:
-Frances and Gerard having sex in a grave yard because Gerard said his worst fear was to die a virgin (he just wanted an excuse to get laid)
-Gerard talking to Frances about Frank
-Mikey walking in on Frank and Gerard and throwing stuffed unicorns at them (I don't know, I was really bored and I reread that and I was like 'what?')
-Gerard telling Frank about how he's afraid that he's gonna turn into his father (I honestly don't know why I didn't bother adding that. Never mind, I'm totally posting that one later, as soon as I find it.)
-Gerard and Mikey talking to each other about their parents
And there's a couple more, but I seriously don't like them. Like, I loath them. I loath something I came up with for a fan fiction. Because I'm normal. If you guys want to see any of those comment which ones