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Can't Trust a Girl in Blue

Chapter 1 - 4 corners, 2 sides

Two boys, twins, waiting in their car across the street of a more high class party for the part of the city they were in. They wait, watching people come and go from the house. The loud techno music they could hear and feel from the car.

The shorter and less thin of the twins gets out of the car, followed by his younger brother, who was much more built like slender man. They walk towards the house, up the few steps, and through the front door, searching for something.

They split up, the oldest talks to some of the more partying girls, while the younger goes towards the music. For the song “Teenagers” played loudly. He keeps his eye on his older brother, as his brother flirts with the girls. The younger brother looks to his left, he sees two girls who seem over drunk in the corner, he walks quickly towards them.

“Are you okay?” he asks helping one up. “You’re drunk. Let me take you home.” And before they can reject he grabs their hands. Seeing his brother walking with girls as well out the front door and too the car. His brother helps them in. Then he adds his own two girls. They all got in at will. And then the brothers get in the car quickly. Start the car and starts off. Doors locked now, no way out. They drive away to their abandoned school house.

Notes

So far it is supposed to be very confusing. I refuse to say a twins name until an actual character says it. Just know that this chapter is of the POV of the younger twin.

Title by sleeping with sirens <3

Don't forget to smile :3

Comments

@Another_Reckless_Killjoy
Haha x3 I promise im not stalking u

kpjbb12 kpjbb12
1/6/14

What A Conicedence, take the S of Owens (Matthew) and you would get my fathers name :')

@carleykilljoy1129
Thanx <3 u hav no idea how much that really means to me. I really hav been having troubles in life and I think imma try to reflect myself more through Echo lik I hav been and hope I can get this story finished x3

kpjbb12 kpjbb12
12/29/13

Al

@kpjbb12
Your welcome I enjoy it a lot when u update its a twist its different then anyone else writes its unique and that's what mcr was about I'm not gonna pressure you to continue if you do not wish but most of the best stories go unfinished and forgotten and I'm rambling but I just want you to no I will always read and enjoy your work