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Traveling With The Doctor

Doctor Who?

The year is 2007. The Doctor has just lost his dear love and companion, Rose Tyler, in an alternative universe. Mikey is studying English literature in England. What will happen?

"Hello, I'm the Doctor." the tall, slim man in the pinstriped suit extended his hand to a short young woman by the name of Elsa Ramirez. "Doctor who?" "The Doctor. Those things you're seeing, aliens. Trying to get home." "I've been seeing aliens?" Elsa squeaked "That is correct."

Mikey yawned and packed up his things from under his desk to go home to his flat and rest. Exams were nearly over and they were extremely gruelling. He lay down on his bed, eating ramen noodles and watching bad television when he heard a strange whirring noise. "What the..." he got up and went outside only in his boxers and an old shirt. A blue box seemed to appear out nowhere, the door creaking open and revealing a young woman and a slightly older looking man. "Thank you for saving me, Doctor. Where are we, exactly?" "Well, we're supposed to be in Los Angeles, where you're from. But it looks like we're just outside Cambridge." The man stepped out and looked around. This man was odd. Very odd. "What're you doing?" Mikey called without thinking "Doctor, there's someone there." the raven haired girl smiled. She was dark, with red lips and a curvy build, all toned. Mikey blushed in the dark and rushed into his flat to get dressed. He threw on a pair of skinny jeans, sneakers, a band shirt and a hoodie before rushing back out "Hello? Are you still there?" The Doctor, as the girl had called him, called out "Yes, yeah I'm here!"

Comments

@gerard-way-vevo
Sure! I love checking out stories :)
@ChemicalWayBride
I know how that feels. Btw, mind checking out my story? I only have one story posted so it shouldn't be too hard to find lol. Critique is welcome.
@gerard-way-vevo

I noticed that. It's been hard to type lately because my family keep looking over my shoulder and I want to keep my stories away from them. I'll be fixing that in the newer chapters
@ChemicalWayBride
Of course, there's one thing that I could critique. The sentences are too short and scrunched up into one paraghraph.
@gerard-way-vevo

Thanks darling! I'm glad you like it :)