The first draft for the first chapter is officially finished. I am doing a ton or research and my hand is killing me! I need a Beta so if anyone may be interested, here is what I am looking for:

Experience:
This story is my new baby and is hopefully going to be my best ever. So, I want my Beta to know what they are doing from grammar to spelling to everything in-between. If you don't seriously know what you are doing, sorry this isn't for you.

Age:

I want someone who is 14 and over, unless you are a 13 year old super genius. Even then I would prefer someone older than that.

Patience, understanding, and honesty:

I need someone who can have patience because I am not a new writer, but this is the first
really serious story I have done, so I am not amateur, but I am no Shiningartifact either. You will have to understand that I am fairly young and am basing this off of a movie. Honesty is the best policy, especially for a Beta. I need you to tell me the truth, If something flat out sucks, I need to know!



If you think you can do it, message me. Please, please only Beta me if you actually are an experienced or at least semi-experienced writer.

And now, the summary/beginning of the first chapter!

"I am Frank Iero. I am 18 years old, only medium cute and I have a superpower. I can’t fly, I can’t turn invisible and I am pretty sure a bullet would turn me good dead. I don’t have X-Ray vision either- well sort of. The fact is, I am incapable of being lied to. When someone tells a lie to me- to anyone, I know the truth of what they mean. So, there are no lies in my world or nothing but- it’s kind of hard to explain. It’s like movies from other places. Someone says “La meteo en est belle,” and at the bottom of the screen it says- I don’t know what it says I flunked French. But I’ve been this way since I was little."


XD Love,
Mayhem

Notes

Xo.


"These hands hold nothing! These hands hold nothing! These eyes, are blind."