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@MikeyLotan12
Sometimes I prefer to keep it a mystery and let the reader decide. I don't know if I could write another part as sometimes the idea just comes and goes and my mind goes blank. Who knows lol.
@erinjaynee
Nothing major. I just didn't quite understand if Frank chose Gerard over his sister at the end. Did he break up with her to be with Gee, or did they just keep it a secret?
@erinjaynee
Good! I'm glad to hear it. Everyone should feel encouraged to do what they enjoy. It's brave and exciting to share your art like this and you should be proud and do more of what you love! Isn't that part of what MCR's all about? Looking forward to seeing more from you! Sas x
@SaskiaK
Thanks! To be honest, I wasn't sure on how to end it. I was thinking of making a part 2 but I'll probably ruin it lol.
I really appreciate the comment! Definitely fuels the writing desire!
I really enjoyed reading this. Different to some others I've read, although my head was thinking through the 'real life' logistics like, oh his poor sister and what will happen to their relationship etc... It must have been good to make me think like that! I must admit, I was a bit puzzled by the ending too though - I couldn't quite work out if it was a one night stand or Frank was going to break up with his fiancé - I assumed the latter but I wasn't 100% sure. Loved it though!! Sas xx
@MikeyLotan12
Thank you! May I ask what part confused you so I know for future? :) I suck at ending stories.
I loved it! The end confused me a bit but it was really well written. Good luck getting back to writing
@erinjaynee
Oh okay. I'm gonna go with "he left Gerard's sister to be able to fuck Gee again for the rest of their lives", becuase they both wanted it for so long
6/17/17