The Therapy Group - Comments

Dude is this abandoned???? I was really liking this.

hellloo

hellloo

This is really good

Not sure why I never found this til now, but I just read it and I really like!...looking forward to more.
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~~~hey there, is there gonna be an update soon?~~~

You have no idea how much i love this story! Everything is brilliant, the grammar, the storyline, the description EVERYTHING.
You are an AMAZING author like seriusly. I'll be suprised if I don't see your books in bookstores soon.

@Anonymous Writer
Cool beans, plus, all anyone needs to be a great writer is a set goal and a very interactive auidience.

@Bupropion
Indeed it did. It just made more sense and also gave me an idea. (:

Yay! My comment made an impact on the whole story itself :DD

@LemonGee
No problem :))

@Bupropion
Thank you for that, really. Hm, maybe I'll go back in and
do some editing. Re-evaluate the character plot a little more, so that it's fitting, and not so many mixed signals. This helps me as a growing writer, so I really appreciate your feedback. Once again, thank you! xx (:

Chptr 4 Re:
You asked for feedback .. So here it is ^.^
I love the way you write and explain things so well. Such as surroundings and how Gerard is feeling while also using some indirect characterization. My only con would be just how at first you perceived Frank to be a kind of a bad ass with tattoos, who says his name confidently.. But then he got shy when asked his problem and that kind of threw me off.. I would have thought he would have given the therapist some smartass remark. And whenever he complimented Gee I kind of expected him to be sarcastic with it. I'm just confused with his character, other than that.. It's absolutely perfect!

Cute

@Brendon Urie & @Electric Siren
I'm really glad you're enjoying it. Thank you! (:

This story seems pretty goddamn awesome! I'm absolutely IN LOVE!

I'm really into this, please update soon!

@Blubxll
Thank you! xx

This seems really interesting so far! I'm excited to see where it goes.