Where do we belong? (Anywhere but here) - Comments

..... uh.... wow..... this time I don't have a witty comment or some shit....
badadadada im loving this story

@Originality-At-Its-Finest
I'm jumping around inside my head about doing a couple more short stories like this one. I'm glad you liked it and yeah who knows with these two. Might have happened. It also makes me upset.
Thank you for reading me, I'm very glad you liked this!

Maybe it did go like this, you know? Maybe that's how it went back in November. I'm glad they're still friends, but I'm also upset because like they're not as close? My thoughts are severely jumbled when it comes to those two men cx I really liked the story though. Your writing is very good and I enjoy it. I hope to see more of your worrying around in the future <3

@xofunghoul
if you want to do the dialog that way it's totally fine by me. It was just what I was taught :D

@petewentztheemogod
Oh god you are right about Mikey. I've been writing about another "Mickey" for so long that I kinda forgot. I feel like a loser right now hahahaha
And about the quotation marks, I kinda like dialogue like this? I've written it like this my whole life. Maybe it's cause I'm not American and I'm used to read/write like that. Anyways. Thank you for your comment! I'll fix Mikey!!

I can't wait to read the next chapter :3

this is pretty good, and I'm liking it.
A few pointers though, use quotation marks for dialog instead of hyphens. You know, "these things". And, it's Mikey, not Mickey.
Sorry if I came off as rude or something, sometimes I have a hard time picking the right words, but I'm just leaving some constructive criticism.
:D

@Crappycakefrank
Thank you so much!! I'll post the Last part soon~

I like this so far!!