You're Beautiful to me - Comments

@Frerard Forever
I started out writing the same way, until someone clued me in.. Now I pay more attention to punctuation, and I have lots more subscribers.
cant wait to read more of this fic.
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@Gee'sCLUELESSgirl!
okay thank you for the help , now that i look at it it would help with that i didnt realise how little punctuation i had xx

I like the story idea, but you need to use more punctuation.. full stops for example!.. It will make it easier to read, instead of it looking like one giant sentence.
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