Can I Be Your Dying Wish - Comments

You know what I do to counter the weird format problem, I put an extra space in between each person's dialog. Idk if that helps anyone else, but thats just what I do. There is def more space put in my stories in general, but I figured that ppl would rather have that then one huge paragraph massed together. I hate when that ends up happening in my fave stories.

@Three Cheers For Killjoys
its okay, i tottally understand what you meann

@Three Cheers For Killjoys
its okay, i tottally understand what you meann

@killjoy725
Oh okay, sorry then I didn't know

@Three Cheers For Killjoys
i normally do, (the format is more clear when you read this on wattpad) the uploader on this site screws up the formatting quite a bit.

Aww very cute!!!
just one thing. Could you maybe whenever a new person speaks start a new paragraph it's a bit confusing with who speaks when otherwise that would be awesome
i really really love this story!

*appreciation comment*

@fabulousbabykilljoy
apreciation is never annoying, i love feedback :)

I may become annoying but I will let you know I love this story with every chapter you update. Can't wait for the next one!!

yesssssssssss

Love it

I really like this, I cant wait for more. Interesting start.