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@Join the Masquerade
I bet! It took rereading the last few paragraphs before I realized how subtly you filtered in the true ending. Awesome show of writing skills.

@Clockwork.Sanity
Thank you :) That's one of my favourites I've written :)

@Join the Masquerade
I read Jealousy and Hatter and both were so wonderfully written. I especialy love the underlying creepiness of Hatter.

@Clockwork.Sanity
I have more up on mibba.com under the same username but I don't think any are MCR ones :/

@Join the Masquerade
Oh! I thought I'd heard it before but I didn't know where. It's still beautiful nonetheless. I NEED more oneshots from you. Lol.

@Clockwork.Sanity
The first part of that is actually from a Green Day song. I wrote this for a prompt which was to include that lyric in a story :)

“You found a home in all your scars and ammunition, Gerard,” I croaked. “I didn’t.”

That's the line that got me. It is so inherently beautiful and tragic. Damn, it'd be perfect in a Smiths song.

@Sharpest_Life_B
Awww that sounds like a cute story :P I neeeeeeed to get back into reading Frerard again. D:

@Join the Masquerade
Haha yeah I wasn't going to have any in mine either at first. I changed my mind for that very reason. Personally I go in search of specific ratings only if I'm in a certain mood. It's a same if ppl count it out based on that. There's a cute set about Frankie babysitting the Ways. Non smut, the ways are young in 2 of them so it's g rated I think. One is "adult" bc the boys are teens but rly that one was disappointing.

@Sharpest_Life_B
Naww thanks :) I'm thinking it probably isn't popular BECAUSE it's not smut haha ;) Also, it's pretty old work.

Wow. I think this is the best "non smut" one shot I've read. Not that I think smut is better I just think it should be judged separately. The fact that it has almost no comments or votes must mean that ppl just haven't found this yet.

@Gee'sCLUELESSgirl!
Thanks :)

love it! X