Beyond The Filter - Comments

NOTEEEEE

hurrah, I've fixed my whole spaces problem as my iPad was being a bit of a bitch about it but I fought against it for you guys! Thanks for reading it means a lot! Next part coming soon :)

@kpjbb12
Thanks! I tried to edit it but it keeps crashing out so it might take time:( but I know what you mean:)

finished the first chapter... i think u should put a space between ur paragraphs so its easier to read... im getting a bit of a migraine or else i would continue... but honestly... its pretty good ^-^