Children Surrender - Comments

@Gee'sCLUELESSgirl!
Yah sorry. I tend to forget to read over it.

Love the story, but the spelling mistakes are kinda distracting! X

@crazy vampire bitch
Exactly. Sad thing is I write both. My daughter made me write frerard. Lol.xxx

@PartyPoisonlives4ever
Haha I feel yeah. Im like to read them to but dont believe its an actual thing and uts easier writing bandmember/oc because you can put ot in the point of veiw of the oc and not have to worry about "does this sound like something this person would do

@crazy vampire bitch
Woohoo. Didn't used to like them. Hate writing them. Don't believe it ever existed. But love reading them. I know. I'm weird.xxx

@PartyPoisonlives4ever
Yes its a ferard. Eventually. It might not be till be the middle of the story. But frerard will happen.

This story is very interesting. But can I ask if it's a frerard, please?xxx