Misguided Ghosts - Comments

Update?

OMG PLZ UPDATE :D

This is great. Oh my god.

The last line it's funny cuz he just like kill someone and then he's like oh wonder what frank's doing like so chill and not giving a fuck haha

Ok, so GEE'S insane!!..... X

Yay update i was so excited and when so this fic was updated i was so happy i did a happy dance
I'm LAME i know

Ahhh so good.

oh shit what's gerard gonna do ?

I really love this. keep it up.

HA gerard called Frankie babe . this a great chapter! :)

@gross.erin
Oops sorry

It was just suggestions. If I remember correctly, you did ask us for our opinions and I simply gave mine. But I guess people only want good feedback. I did say I liked the idea. Constructive criticism is what really helps most authors. But nevermind I guess.

definitely a YAY YAY YAY i love this :)

@gross.erin
Do you always correct grammar? That's very nice of you, but I think I can overcome my grammar skills on my own. Considering I could of been really tired not really focusing on any of that. Thanks though but none of that is really needed.

I think you need to capitalize your "I"s. You also need to add subjects to your sentences. "Slithering out of the drivers seat and running to my door," has no subject, just a predicate. I know you're trying to list a chain of events, but it could be better if you added a subject, or at least a predicate nominative. Maybe even a direct object could get by, but it just sounds like a huge run-on sentence when you don't add a whom or what. Very great idea, really like it. Just brush up your grammar c:

oooOOOOOOOOOOO a frerard ghost story YAY i like this so far