Finding Color - Comments

I'm in love with this! It's so well written and the relationship between the characters are very believable! Gerard's character is so sweet, I wonder if Lilah's going to let him in... I hope you update soon :)

You've got amazing talent.

@ATOMIC_IMPLODER
Thank you! I don't have a set plan for it, but I like where it seems to be going, too!

@MyChemFREAK
Thanks so much!

@Join the Masquerade

Thank you so much! That means a lot coming from you. Your story is one of my favorites at the moment.

OHMYGOD this is written beautifully

This is really well written. Everything just sort of... flows. Your dialogue to description ratio is exactly as I like it - perfect mix of action and description.

I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this. Also, the way you described how she feels this need to explain again and again that she's only after friends is like, spot on haha. It's such a specific feeling of feeling egocentric and shit scared of someone caring too much about you at the same time.

I love where this story is going

@Paranormal Parody and @ATOMIC_IMPLODER

Thank you both so much! I really appreciate your comments. :)

Beautiful

I really like this!

Already working on a new chapter guys!

@Lost-In-Darkness
Thanks so much! I've actually been loving your "Disappearing Into the Night" story. It's awesome! I've been thinking of writing a Killjoy fanfic myself, actually.

Please update as soon as you can because I am loving this!! :D

@arrogancedowntoascience & @pantaloons Thank you! New chapter's up!

I really can't wait to read what's next

You've got a really good first chapter going here. I can't wait for the next one!