Somebody To Love - Comments

Sorry don't know what happened there.

You have to keep writing this story is great!

You have to keep writing this story is great!

Gosh this is splendid you have to update!!

Oh. My. Franking. Gee. You gotta update it was amazingly good

I love this,please update!

PLEASE UPDATE. Seriously wonderful. I usually don't give long comments but I'm hoping if I tell you all the reasons I like it you'll update sooner.

I'm going to watch timer now because that shit is an interesting topic.

Your fucking amazing for taking that action and using it as a prompt.

Your writing is very good. My only advise is to use metaphores and similies. Like:
"His hair was black as night and it framed his face so perfectly like it was shaped by god himself."
or,
"I was so happy I seriously felt like I was going to exsplode. Like honestly. I could've sworn that at any moment my guts would be strewn across the room for poor Gee to pick up, and the thing that caused it? He called me Frankie."
oorr,
"I giggled (or skipped) like a fuckin school girl"

So yeah. I truly like your stuff. Please update yeah?