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@Sharpest_Life_Supb
It is hard to tell but i could tell that you meant no harm in it but just helping. I'm glad that you enjoyed it and there will be more to come soon :)
No worries. I debated whether or not I should bc when u message someone u cant tell their tone. I rly didn't want it to come off snark and since I'm new on here, I'm not even sure if ppl want this kind of feedback. I don't even have any of my own stuff on here. ;) But it was all in love. Ive rly enjoyed this story a lot.
@Sharpest_Life_Supb
You're right i should have put more detail and resistance from the brothers and had them ask more questions. I will be revising the whole story soon. Thank you for the feedback.
Not to be nit picky, but if her brothers are as protective as we know they are, wouldn't they at least want to know where she's moving? They may be in the studio at a certain point but I would think that Gee would have wanted the address and wanted to know who she was moving in with. Am I wrong?
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@Sharpest_Life_Supb
Thanks I had some writers block but now i have some fresh ideas :)
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