@MCRmy forever I'm so glad you liked it, I changed my mind about the first chapter and I rewrited it lol I think the first one was so depressing, and I don't need all that drama in the very first chapter. So, there's a new first chapter (:
Hey! It's Peyton! You did really good and i really like it(: I'll definitely read more. There are a few mistakes but they're minor and aren't really that big of a deal. For English not being you're first language you're still very good at writing in it. Love you dude.
@MCRmy forever
I'm so glad you liked it, I changed my mind about the first chapter and I rewrited it lol
I think the first one was so depressing, and I don't need all that drama in the very first chapter. So, there's a new first chapter (:
8/8/14