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@Bunny
You are EXTREMELY talented Bunny!(trust me) Thankyou, I really enjoy writing analogies. Writers come to me, just for me to write and anoligy for them XD I am giving the best advise I know. Read soem of my stuff someday? Perferably: A Letter To Gerard (Not like your series at all i swear!), Trying To Escape The Inivitable, or/and Heartbreak is forever.
You are funny Bunny.
You are EXTREMELY talented Bunny!(trust me) Thankyou, I really enjoy writing analogies. Writers come to me, just for me to write and anoligy for them XD I am giving the best advise I know. Read soem of my stuff someday? Perferably: A Letter To Gerard (Not like your series at all i swear!), Trying To Escape The Inivitable, or/and Heartbreak is forever.
You are funny Bunny.
@Mirror_Mayhem
a) I don't mind the lyrics at all.
b) Holy fuck, those are good ways to describe sparkly eyes
c) thank you for the real advice, I am definitely going to utilize that.
d) I'm glad you like it
e) ... you think I'm talented... <3<3<3<3
a) I don't mind the lyrics at all.
b) Holy fuck, those are good ways to describe sparkly eyes
c) thank you for the real advice, I am definitely going to utilize that.
d) I'm glad you like it
e) ... you think I'm talented... <3<3<3<3
Love it or leave it(we do carry on!)
Sorry couldn't help the lyric quoeting...besides that, I really like this story. It is not too cliche' until you make it that way. Like saying "Her eyes sparkled." BOOO! Be more like "He eye's gleamed like stars on acid" or "Her eyes shined like pixies had came and delictatly shined them after sparkling there pixe dust over her unreal irises."
XD As long as you jazz it up, make good analogies, TAKE IT SLOW, make unexpected twists, and make it realistic (I.e. not falling in love in two seconds). You can't go wrong.
You're a talented bitch Bunny, so let's hop to the next chapter eh?
Sorry couldn't help the lyric quoeting...besides that, I really like this story. It is not too cliche' until you make it that way. Like saying "Her eyes sparkled." BOOO! Be more like "He eye's gleamed like stars on acid" or "Her eyes shined like pixies had came and delictatly shined them after sparkling there pixe dust over her unreal irises."
XD As long as you jazz it up, make good analogies, TAKE IT SLOW, make unexpected twists, and make it realistic (I.e. not falling in love in two seconds). You can't go wrong.
You're a talented bitch Bunny, so let's hop to the next chapter eh?
@p3rfect_f4ilur3
It's not too cliche? And thank you ever so much, i really appreciate it. Especially from you because i read your stories and you're all like "HERE PEASANTS, HAVE PERFECTION". so yeah, thanks :D
@sassy boob tre
THNK YUH! it's alright, if it weren't for spell check -- well i don't know where I would be.
It's not too cliche? And thank you ever so much, i really appreciate it. Especially from you because i read your stories and you're all like "HERE PEASANTS, HAVE PERFECTION". so yeah, thanks :D
@sassy boob tre
THNK YUH! it's alright, if it weren't for spell check -- well i don't know where I would be.
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The problem with this story is that I'm not really sure how to continue it. I'm leaving it up here just in case I ever figure it out, but I can't promise anything sorry xo
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