This is my shot, Let's hope I'll remember it - Comments

FUCK! Now I wanna know the idea.

Up date now -_-

I am completely and utterly in love with this. Gerard is so sweet. Keep this going. Can't wait for more

Thanks everyone for the nice comments!

Your chapters need to be longer... Like twice it's already size... And when there's a different person speaking enter it put the new person speaking dialogue and then do the same thing... I'm not trying to be a bitch but I wanted to give some constructive criticism...

Your chapters need to be longer... Like twice it's already size... And when there's a different person speaking enter it put the new person speaking dialogue and then do the same thing... I'm not trying to be a bitch but I wanted to give some constructive criticism...

Your chapters need to be longer... Like twice it's already size... And when there's a different person speaking enter it put the new person speaking dialogue and then do the same thing... I'm not trying to be a bitch but I wanted to give some constructive criticism...

Your chapters need to be longer... Like twice it's already size... And when there's a different person speaking enter it put the new person speaking dialogue and then do the same thing... I'm not trying to be a bitch but I wanted to give some constructivecriticism

please update soon

ARGHHHH NEED MORE!!

love this