I'm Not Okay (I promise) - Comments

@GeesGirl!
YAYAY!!!!!! I'm glad you like it! :)

:3 I love this

Yay! You're back!! I had to, like, reread the whole thing so I could remember what was happening, but I'm glad I did, cos I love this fic!! :) Xx

Can't wait for more this is great :D

@FerardFangirl4life!
Oh ok few!

@One_Of_The_Fabulous_Killjoys
of course I wouldnt!

Don't worry if its short! its perfect just the way it is :3 but if you want to make it longer go ahead :) just now I will go with whatever you put in this story :3 unless they all die in the next chapter then I will flip out but you wouldn't do that.... would you?

@JadeWay XO
Ill try!!!!!! I'm just trying to figure out where this story is going so I'll try to make the next chapter a bit longer

its great so far! update or ill dieeeeee!!!! XD (if your looking for advice: you could make the chapters a bit longer)
~JadeWay XO

@FerardFangirl4life!
kk

@ValkyrieCaine.StealTheSkies
kk we can message just send me ur ideas cause i seriously need help!!!!!

so far, its pretty good, but yeah, as MCR_ShatteredHeart said, yeah, add more detail and dialogue. But also put inmore of a storyline, a plot. if u want help id rather talk it over messages- if we blurt out the plot on the public msg, then everyone will know everything.

I think this story is great and that you should continue :4 I can't have any tips though because I'm not good at that type of stuff and truly, I'm scared people will hate me for giving tips. Im scared people will take it the wrong way :/ but no really please continue this story it's great :33

Hey it's not bad at all, I would keep going. Don't worry about the short chapter, as you continue to write the chapters will get longer. Just try adding some more detail here and there, maybe more dialogue but again this isn't bad.

Hope you continue to write!!!

Its super short but I'm new at this!!!