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Never leave without me - Comments
When I read that they put up the x-ray and saw something they didn't expect (end of chapter two), I immediately thought oh my gawd he's pregnant before I remembered he's a he! (Great story so far btw, keep it up!) :D
@Raysfro
Thanks so much im glad you like it im really trying to improve on my writing style with this story and i will do my best to update soon
Lol ill save that idea for another story. But i'm really glad you liked it all the same. I'm also a bit of a comment whore so I'm really happy you commented i'll keep it up.
3/14/14