Can You Feel My Heart? - Comments

I am so ill in the head, I THINK IT'S HAUT!

the title is from BMTH-Can you feel my heart, right?

That made my skin crawl! But, I am so sick in the head, I liked it.

Not bad for a first time. I honestly do not read porn w/o plot, but i figured it was you, so i gave it a shot. A little rushed, but I know were nervous. My next chapter(s) of Cool Devices are Way and Fraycest centralized. Maybe you will get some ideas from it for another one shot. ^-^

@ms.MCR

your fine;) you'd think that they would at least put her in her teens, right? eww... just- eww...

@katiekilljoy
Same here it is truly disgusting especially the fact that she is still a child makes it even worse cause that just means some sick pervert went out there and sexualised an innocent four year old little girl. *shudders in disgust*

Sorry for ranting in your comments, I shall stop now.

@ms.MCR

baycest.... no. just... no. I don't do baycest ever... I think its one thing if its his brother... but not his daughter... (not trying to offend anyone who may like baycest..) why would someone want to write about that? I just find it kinda disturbing to be honest.

@katiekilljoy
But then wouldn't that mean us associating with each other would mean we have a social life? Confusing ass shit... I like it, a lot of people are staying away from it lately cause of the whole Baycest issue but I for one am not going to deter from what I have always liked.

@ms.MCR

we can have no social life together!!! oh... and thank you for reading.... I wasn't quite sure how people would take this. waycest isn't the most excepted ship, unlike Frerard, Frikey, etc, etc...

"yummy little tale." Haha! I really liked this by the way. There is nothing wrong with having no social life because you keep others with no social life entertained aka me. ^-^