Shoot From the Hip, Aim For the Head - Comments

Imma fix them soon. I've currently got the whole thing posted on mibba, and didn't have access to a computer but I'll get them worked out as soon as I can! Hard to edit stuff from a phone DX But thank you very much for the support!

I can't believe no one has commented on this!

I for one, like it.

It's unique... Interesting...

And you bring a ton of MCR references into it, like the SING music video, and you had the lyrics to one of there songs a couple chapters back... I can't remember either, but it keeps me interested.

You constantly describe things well, and make new and exciting things happen. Plus, the chappys are nice and long.

This is without a doubt, great.

Though if you could seperate the text into paragrapghs, i'd appreciate it!