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@ChemicalWayBride
I know how that feels. Btw, mind checking out my story? I only have one story posted so it shouldn't be too hard to find lol. Critique is welcome.
I know how that feels. Btw, mind checking out my story? I only have one story posted so it shouldn't be too hard to find lol. Critique is welcome.
@gerard-way-vevo
I noticed that. It's been hard to type lately because my family keep looking over my shoulder and I want to keep my stories away from them. I'll be fixing that in the newer chapters
I noticed that. It's been hard to type lately because my family keep looking over my shoulder and I want to keep my stories away from them. I'll be fixing that in the newer chapters
@ChemicalWayBride
Of course, there's one thing that I could critique. The sentences are too short and scrunched up into one paraghraph.
Of course, there's one thing that I could critique. The sentences are too short and scrunched up into one paraghraph.
Sure! I love checking out stories :)
9/30/13