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Just You And I Your Starless Eyes Remain. - Comments
OMG!! I love this so much! Its so emotional to watch Frankie try and not only fight back his feelings but bear the thought that he could possibly loose his best friend, god that last chapter made me cry and it takes alot to make me cry. :'D well done! and update soon!!
ASDFGHJKLA; okay okay. Mafia fics are my absolute WEAKNESS. It's like, crack. And a FRERARD mafia fic?? CRACK WITH FRICKING SPRINKLES. You've got a decent thing going on here, I'd advise some editing of a couple errors and a little more descriptive detailing and style to make it a bit more interesting (it doesn't really deflect the freaking AWESOMENESS of MAFIA AND FRERARD). But I really see potential here, I hope you don't give up on your story. :)
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Have you given up on this? I hope not, cos it's SO good! X
5/9/14